The Rose - poem?

I wrote this poem for my husband for valentines day- and i gave him a red rose w/ it. :)





This Rose



I took this rose

From my heart.

It’s been growing

From the start.



It will only live

For at least, 3 days through

Just to tell you how much

I’m in love with you.



As it dies,

its magic will stay.

Forever in your heart

To remind you everyday…



That when we hold hands,

kiss, and touch.

Each moment together,

each moment in love.



That nothing can compare of how I feel

When I’m with you.

And I’m hoping that you feel

The same way too.



Just a little bit of love made our

Rose Garden start,

If you ever need another rose,

All you have to do, is reach into my heart.

The Rose - poem?
I like it. it is pretty good, there is however a change I would make; "That nothing can compare of how I feel" I would change that to; "That nothing can compare to how I feel. Now that is just a simple suggestion from a simple person.
Reply:That was very sweet. Iam sure your husband would have been mighty pleased if you gift him with such a beautiful poem. You must really love your husband to write such a romantic poem.
Reply:find the poem so so. The part where you tell of your heart, how it is that it is a rose, is really touching.
Reply:aww thats so sweet! i liked it!

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